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Sunday, September 5, 2010

Forbidden


Temptation
Seductively calls my name
As the twilight calmly creeps forward
And envelopes me in deepening darkness.

Will I be strong
Or will I break,
Carelessly but successfully escaping
Willpower's too gentle grasp?

janice
2010

Written for Magpie Tales

10 comments:

  1. I like the way you used the apple/temptation connection ... very nice!

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  2. Sometimes it's nice when willpower is gentle.

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  3. Yes I've been there: breaking 'Willpower's too gentle grasp' 'Hold on tightly - let go lightly' is one of my oft repeated phrases - it applies well here. You captured it nicely.

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  4. Boy- these are words of truth! Bravo!

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  5. Willpower and I have the same strength...we're both lousy at it! I like this. Sweet and succinct!

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  6. I liked this a lot. It's OK if you give into temptation with the apple. It's the chocolate caramel cheesecake you have to fight off. Its lure can be very seductive indeed.

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  7. I was just about the say something very close to Patti! However, there are plenty of temptations I live with and there are times I let go. Something about 'forbidden fruit!'
    Love this poem, I am going to have to direct my clients to it as I know it will speak to them!

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  8. Subtle and special and wonderfully written.

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